Thursday, June 3, 2010


Well when I was reading one of my friend’s blog. I came across a poem titled “Love- Does it Hurt?” and he has argued that it doesn’t. Since I defer from his view point I wrote a reply poem to him that “Love – it hurts”

Here is his poem link

And the words within brackets in my poem are derived from his poem


When her gaze fades
your breath refuses to faze

She is all you can think
and she can never be yours in a blink

She puts a spell on you
and may make forget those around you

(You'd do anything for her...
Anything, even when she's never gonna be yours!)

Few love lift your spirit,
may you feel like flying in heaven,
which may be hell in disguise.

So beware my friend love is more pain than gain
Alas! She makes it rain on sunny day
let alone helps you to hide your tear,
when she wakes away!!!
When she wakes away !!!