LOVE - IT HURTS

Well when I was reading one of my friend’s blog. I came across a poem titled “Love- Does it Hurt?” and he has argued that it doesn’t. Since I defer from his view point I wrote a reply poem to him that “Love – it hurts”

Here is his poem link http://aviderdenker.blogspot.com/2010/04/love-does-it-hurt.html#comments

And the words within brackets in my poem are derived from his poem

LOVE - IT HURTS

When her gaze fades
your breath refuses to faze

She is all you can think
and she can never be yours in a blink

She puts a spell on you
and may make forget those around you

(You'd do anything for her...
Anything, even when she's never gonna be yours!)

Few love lift your spirit,
may you feel like flying in heaven,
which may be hell in disguise.

So beware my friend love is more pain than gain
Alas! She makes it rain on sunny day
let alone helps you to hide your tear,
when she wakes away!!!
When she wakes away !!!

Parting !!!

Silent I read the lines on does love hurt?

Violent my mind starts to spin.

Sweet came her memories,

And the day we said good bye.

She is someone close to my heart

And never had I said what she meant to me

Perhaps this is why, she decided to say good bye.

Silent she said thanks for all,

And more silent she said leave my alone.

Quiet I asked why that so,

And calm she replied I won’t say.

Never I knew the reason and

I am beyond guessing horizon.

The hard I asked her to say me,

The more hard she said leave me alone.

Slowly I sunk more deep in my mental swirl,

Felt hard at me for making this fail.

Will ever I know the reason why this occurred?

Or will I remain silently conquered.

Heavy I said the good bye,

And I am all alone defeated.

Sweet are her memories

Difficult to forget and hard to ignore..

Time will heal all wounds they say

And I am hoping, the words are true.

Friend

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Nagu~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Confused I stood, where the roads diverse,

Not knowing where the end meets in glee.

Thought I back where I came across the same,

And full came my memory, of the hand I held then.

 

The hand of light in my life of dark,

Soft it touched my palm and made my mind rest in balm.

Never had he said I should lie low,

But said I have too much to go.

 

What I did to get a friend like you,

Without you I would have been hew and stew.

You stood by my side, when all else ran,

And said soft and low, that I can win.

 

Sudden I felt a hand by my hand,

Warm rush is what I felt in my mind.

Tender he said, “Take the road, the heart asks you take,

Neither I see the end in sight, but,

Behold I will be there if it ends in plight”

 

Happy I took the path, preferred least by sight,

Because I know I have a shoulder to fall if I slip by fate.

Thanks my friend you mean much to me,

Too much that I can never mean in words.

 

 

 

Conversation With God!

~~~~~Conversation with God!!~~~~~

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Nagu~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Alone I walked in a narrow lane

With sorrow in my heart and fear in my eyes

For the end is unknown.

Sudden I felt a man behind

Walking to me in the pace of lion

Majestic he stood before

Behold you need more eyes to see his grace

Gentle I questioned “Who you are?”

Said He soft, “I am God my child, I am God”

Confused I stood before him,

Hoping that all this is one big lie.

He looked upon me with a benign smile

Behold! fast went my fears as a mist under the sun.

Soft I asked why He is here.

Serene He replied, “I want to walk with you”

We walked under the sun and moon

Under the shade and rain

Never had I known as the days flee

The answer of where I am going

Curious I asked where the journey ends

With a benign smile He said,

“It is for you to decide,

I may be the light but never the direction,

I may be the hope but never the solution,

I may be ease your path, but you got to walkthrough it

For I am in you, the lone voice that never is heard

Understand you and your companion,

 to understand me the better.

For I am there with you forever”

Confused I stood,

And said to him loud

I believed in thy.

He smiled and said believe in you,

“I have given you enough

to believe in you, but you feel,

never you received enough, to believe in you”

“No”, I said, “All is not equal”

“Yes”, He said, “They are as different as your fingers,

Never my creations without a flaw,

Since life is only beautiful with that flaw.

Never I am equal with my blessing,

For you see a toddler born with no arms.

There are reasons beyond you will never understand.

Life is rarely fair, if the flaw stands big in your eyes.

Chase out the fear of disbelief,

Start believing in you for I got better plans for all.

Never look for the end or search for it.

Sudden it my come, but life around must go on.

 No one is a part of the puzzle,

but a bucket a water in the life of ocean.

Pulling him out wouldn’t make a difference,

Unless he made it himself.

Live the life like a man, who made a difference,

But never thy harm your neighbour.

Open your heart for love,

For therein lies the hope for the world.

Time is ripe for you to wake up,

And walk among your family and friends,

Believe me child I got better plans for the world,

If only you can hear me”

Sudden came the shake in my bed

I woke up with sweat in my head

My journey is too good to be true for

I chose an illusion to chase that ever is reached.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Journey

~~~Journey~~~~~

~~ Nagu~~

Alone I sail in my boat,

Feeling the warmth of the sun and the silence of the moon,

Dreaming my life is full and goals are for fool;

Hoping to reach the horizon where my heart is full and life is nil.

 

Sailing under the rain and snow

Smooth and rough the sails go.

For the know and go,

I let my faith rest in wind

 

Music came in the darkest of nights,

and acted as knight for my fear.

Now and then, when doubts arise

I laughed out loud and clear.

 

Never came anyone with me

For this is a journey I take alone

I do not go in search of fun and pleasure but

For peace and leisure.

 

Sudden came the shake in my bed

I woke up with sweat in my head

My journey is too good to be true for

I chose an illusion to chase that ever is reached.